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Parallel lists: keep the same grammatical pattern

“I enjoy drawing, to cycle, and cooking.” The activities are clear, but their forms do not fit together after enjoy.

Professor Scott Mendoza
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The short answer

Write “I enjoy drawing, cycling, and cooking.” The three activities do the same job after enjoy, so give them the same -ing form. Parallel structure means matching grammatical patterns for items doing equivalent jobs.

Read each item after the same opening.

Test the items separately: I enjoy drawing; I enjoy cycling; I enjoy cooking. Each works after enjoy. I enjoy to cycle does not fit this pattern. Then combine the three activities. Keep all three meanings; deleting an awkward item avoids the repair rather than completing it.

Test, then combine

One activity

I enjoy drawing.

A second matching activity

I enjoy cycling.

Three matching activities

I enjoy drawing, cycling, and cooking.

Notice the difference

Matching form does not mean identical words. Drawing, cycling and cooking are different activities with a shared grammatical form.

A three-part check

01

Keep the opening

I enjoy ...

02

Check each activity

drawing / cycling / cooking

03

Combine without changing meaning

I enjoy drawing, cycling, and cooking.

Try it now

Keep three activities parallel

3 questions

Question 1 of 3

Keep all three activities after enjoy. Which version works?
Read all answers and explanations
  1. Keep all three activities after enjoy. Which version works?

    I enjoy hiking, swimming, and painting.

    The first keeps all three activities in -ing form. The second mixes forms; the third removes swimming.

  2. Which single item fits after I enjoy?

    baking

    Baking fits after enjoy. For this meaning, use enjoy doing something.

  3. Which list has three matching infinitives after plan?

    I plan to read, to write, and to revise.

    The last repeats the to + verb pattern. Another valid version is I plan to read, write, and revise; repeating to is not always necessary.

Put it into practice

Repair a hobby description

Keep reading, walking and taking photos as three activities after enjoy.

Original draft

I enjoy reading, to walk, and taking photos.

Which edit meets the goal?
See a model answer

I enjoy reading, walking, and taking photos.

A matching list must fit its opening as well as match internally.

A little more clarity

Common questions

A few useful details before you move on.

Should every list use -ing?

No. Match the form to the surrounding sentence. A list of objects can contain nouns; a plan can contain infinitives.

For example

We need paper, tape, and scissors.

Must I repeat to in an infinitive list?

Not always. To can appear before each verb or only before the first when the shared pattern is clear.

For example

I plan to read, write, and revise.

Take it into your day

Keep the meaning of every item and match its grammatical job.

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