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Give useful playtest feedback: moment, experience, suggestion

“The level is confusing” gives the team little to inspect. “At the first gate, I couldn’t tell which lever opened it” identifies a specific moment.

Professor Scott Mendoza
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The short answer

Start with “At [moment], I couldn’t tell…” or “I found [part] difficult because…”. Then use “might help” for a possible change. Your experience and your suggested solution are different pieces of feedback.

Describe the problem you experienced before proposing a fix.

Couldn’t tell means you could not identify or distinguish something; it does not mean you were unable to speak. Use I to describe your experience. “All players will get lost” needs evidence beyond one playtest. A suggested change can then be introduced as something worth testing.

Experience first, suggestion second

Experience

At the first gate, I couldn’t tell which lever opened it.

Suggestion

A matching symbol might help me identify the right lever.

Notice the difference

Might help labels a possible benefit. It does not prove that the change solves the problem.

Make feedback specific

01

Locate the moment

After the bridge, I couldn’t tell which path led to the tower.

02

Offer a testable idea

A clearer sign might help.

Try it now

Make the feedback useful

3 questions

Question 1 of 3

What does “I couldn’t tell which lever opened the gate” mean?
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  1. What does “I couldn’t tell which lever opened the gate” mean?

    I could not identify the correct lever.

    Couldn’t tell here means could not identify, not could not speak or proved a technical failure.

  2. Which statement locates a personal difficulty?

    After the bridge, I couldn’t tell which path led to the tower.

    It names the moment and what the speaker could not identify, without speaking for all players.

  3. Which phrase clearly labels a proposed change as untested?

    A clearer sign might help.

    Might help proposes a possibility. It leaves room to test the idea.

Put it into practice

Explain a difficult moment

You tested a fictional level. At the first gate, you could not tell which lever opened it. Explain that experience before proposing a change.

  1. Designer

    Where did you get stuck?

Give the specific moment and difficulty.
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  1. Designer

    Where did you get stuck?

  2. You

    At the first gate, I couldn’t tell which lever opened it.

  3. Designer

    What change might help?

  4. You

    A matching symbol on the gate and lever might help.

  5. Designer

    Let’s try that idea and test it.

The first response reports the experience. The second proposes a possible change. Keeping them separate makes both easier to discuss.

A little more clarity

Common questions

A few useful details before you move on.

Can positive feedback be specific too?

Yes. Name the moment and what helped you. “I liked it” is valid as an opinion, but a concrete detail gives the team more to work with.

For example

The sound at the checkpoint helped me notice that my progress had been saved.

Must I suggest a solution in every playtest comment?

No. A clear description of the moment and your difficulty can be useful on its own. If you suggest a change, present it as something that might help and explain what problem it would address.

Take it into your day

Specific experience plus a clearly labeled suggestion is easier to discuss than a sweeping judgment.

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