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TOEFL reading: why is this example included?

Practice a reading skill useful for the current TOEFL iBT Read an Academic Passage task. This original, imagined classroom scenario is a short teaching passage, not an official item or a report of real research.

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The short answer

To identify an example’s function, ask what idea it helps the reader understand. A tray comparison may illustrate how surface features guide water. Repeating that one tray had grooves tells you the example’s content, but not its role.

Explain what the example does, not only what it says.

Read the statement before the example and the sentence after it. Decide whether the example illustrates, contrasts or challenges an idea. In this paragraph it illustrates the first claim through a comparison. Use the actual relationship; an example does not always support the preceding statement.

Original teaching passage

Claim

Surface features can guide the path of water.

Example

In a classroom model, water on a flat tray spread in several directions, while water in a grooved tray followed the channels.

Connection

The comparison illustrates how the shape of a surface can influence where water goes.

Notice the difference

The paragraph compares water movement. It does not compare tray prices or tell readers how to buy equipment.

Connect detail and purpose

01

Find the general idea

surface features → path of water

02

Explain the example’s role

two tray surfaces → a concrete illustration of that relationship

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What does the example do?

3 questions

Question 1 of 3

Why does the paragraph compare the trays?
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  1. Why does the paragraph compare the trays?

    To illustrate how surface features influence water movement.

    Different surface features produce different paths in the supplied example. Price and universal claims are absent.

  2. Which note states only a detail, rather than the example’s role?

    The grooved tray had channels.

    Channels are a detail. The other notes explain how the example helps the reader understand the claim.

  3. Which claim stays within the passage?

    The example links different surfaces to different water paths.

    The passage supports a connection in the example, not claims about all spills or usefulness.

Put it into practice

Improve a function note

Replace a copied detail with a note explaining the example’s purpose.

Original draft

The example is included because one tray had grooves.

Which edit meets the goal?
See a model answer

The example illustrates how surface features can guide water movement.

A good function note names what the example helps explain; it need not repeat every detail.

A little more clarity

Common questions

A few useful details before you move on.

Does an example always support the previous sentence?

No. It can also contrast with or challenge an idea. Read the surrounding sentences to identify its actual role.

For example

An example can illustrate a claim or show an exception.

Is a correct detail enough for a function answer?

No. A detail may be accurate but still fail to explain why the writer includes it. Link it to the idea it serves.

For example

It had grooves. → The grooves illustrate how surface features guide water.

Take it into your day

An example’s function is its contribution to the paragraph’s meaning.

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